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The Hunter Who Saw Through the Humanoid / Chapter 1: The Ancient Guest
The Hunter Who Saw Through the Humanoid

The Hunter Who Saw Through the Humanoid

Author: Bonnie Evans


Chapter 1: The Ancient Guest

Do you know about the uncanny valley effect?

That skin-crawling chill at the back of your neck has roots older than any science—an instinct born around ancient campfires, when our ancestors glimpsed things lurking just beyond the firelight. Creatures that almost, but not quite, looked human. Something in their eyes, or the way their smile lingered, set every nerve on edge. Fast-forward to today, and maybe—just maybe—they’re still out there, blending in with your neighbors, your coworkers, maybe even your family. So how do you tell them apart?

1

A million years ago, humans had just learned to tame fire, trading raw meat and blood for the warmth of cooked meals. At dusk, a small group returned to their cave, dragging their catch behind them, and sparked a fire.

The cave’s air buzzed with warmth and the smell of roasted meat, mingling with the musty scent of wet fur. They settled in a loose circle, firelight flickering across their faces as they shared the kill, voices low and wary.

Suddenly, another figure stepped from the darkness outside. His face was lost in shadow, making him hard to recognize.

The flames caught just enough to hint at his outline, but not enough for anyone to see his features. He paused at the entrance, silent, waiting for some unspoken invitation.

What the cave dwellers didn’t know was that this “person” wasn’t really one of them.

A ripple of unease tickled their spines, but curiosity—and hunger—outweighed suspicion. A bigger group meant better odds against the night’s dangers.

One of the clever hunters grabbed a torch and walked over, sizing up the newcomer. He looked right, seemed to fit in, but something inside the hunter screamed that something was off.

He muttered, "I’ve never seen you before."

The stranger grinned. "Just passing through. I want to sleep here."

The voice was friendly, but the smile felt wrong—like it was copied from memory but not felt.

Humans are social by nature, so the group made room, tossing the stranger a hide to use as a pillow. Everyone tried to act normal, but their eyes kept darting to the newcomer, as if waiting for him to slip back into shadow.

Night fell, and the cave quieted. The clever hunter who’d held the torch couldn’t sleep. His mind raced: what’s wrong with the stranger?

The embers glowed, casting weird, shifting shadows. Every time the hunter closed his eyes, he startled awake, sweating, haunted by the question: what exactly was wrong?

He counted: one nose, two eyes, one mouth, two ears, two arms, two legs…

He ran through each feature again and again, childhood warnings echoing in his mind: Beware the ones who pretend to be us. Monsters wear the faces of friends.

Everything checked out. No tails, no wings, nothing obvious.

He tried to remember every tale from his elders—stories about shapeshifters, tricksters, things that wore human skins—but none seemed to fit. Still, his skin prickled, like he’d found a rattlesnake in his bed.

The hunter was stumped. He just knew something was off.

His heart hammered, sweat chilled on his skin. He kept glancing at the stranger, waiting for a slip—a claw, a fang, anything. But the stranger just slept, curled up like everyone else.

He risked another look. The stranger breathed slow and deep, peaceful. That only made it worse. It was as if he belonged there—almost.

Somewhere in the night, the hunter finally drifted into a restless sleep. He dreamed. In his dream, the stranger was there again.

Now it was just the two of them. His heart pounded, flashes of old warnings racing through his head: Don’t meet their eyes. Don’t let them speak your name. He whispered prayers to whatever spirits might hear, desperate for protection.

The stranger seemed to sense his thoughts and leaned in, hissing, "Shh, even heaven knows nothing of my existence..."

A chill cut through the hunter in the dream. He tried to scream, but the words stuck thick in his throat.

The two moved closer. The hunter’s hands shook as he looked at the stranger’s face—then it hit him: he finally remembered what was wrong.

Their eyes met. Terror surged white-hot through his brain.

He woke with a scream and bolted from the cave, howling into the night.

His cries echoed down the hill, scattering birds and waking other tribes. Instinct took over: run, run, run before it found him again.

"It’s too frightening. I must tell everyone this secret."

At dawn, shivering, he tried to warn everyone he met. The dream, the thing’s face, burned into his memory.

From that day on, the fear passed through generations. Centuries later, we call it the uncanny valley effect—a chill inherited from the past, still lurking under our skin.

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